​No, this still isn’t The Other Story. Settle down. Rest assured The Other Story is coming, you fools, because you all were stupid enough to keep asking for it despite me explicitly telling you you didn’t want to see it. But before I post it, I need to get a few other stories out of the way, partially because I don’t want to lose the opportunity to run them on FFF, and partially to soften the eventual blow (if I ran The Other Story after a rough couple of FFFs, the readership of TR would undoubtedly drop in half). So it’ll run in a few weeks. Stop asking.

Now onto this week’s FFF entry, submitted to me by Mike. It’s a lengthy tale of robots and romance, written by an author who calls herself TheRealMrsOptimusPrime, the reasons for which will be abundantly clear shortly. Right now, the story is four chapters and 9000 words, so you’ll forgive me if I sum up a bit.

• The main character, Bonita, was in a car wreck, whereupon a doctor turned her into a half-robot, half-girl, Bionic Woman-style.
• Eventually it’s revealed that several other girls were also in the wreck, also turned into robo-girls, and joined up with the Autobots.
• Bonita begins working for the government as a Bionic Woman, kind of, but her first mission is in Taiwan to fight Decepticons, where the Autobots show up, and…

On the ground zero where the battle was taking place, My self and the
other females were trying to keep the enemy form destroying the city. I
went to one of them and pulled out her red ion blades and took her
battle stance. So she ran up to the enemy, but he shot her in the chest
armor and she thrown back into a building behind her. The enemy slowly
walked toward her but he stopped…

Optimus Prime was running toward
them. I looked at the enemy wondering why he had stopped moving, I
tilted my head back to see the most wonderful thing…He was the most
handsome charming robot looking man I have ever seen. He had the most
beautiful light blue eyes, that I have seen. I was lost in his eyes for
what seemed for the longest time then he was gone…What I didn’t know is
that he had tackled the one who shot me. As I saw him take that ugly
looking thing to the ground…then he ripped off the giants head and
dropped it on the ground. I looked around and saw the other ones like
him retreat. As the hot looking one walked toward me he said in sexy
voice “are you alright and who are you, where did you come from?” As I
answered in a shy but beautiful voice “I am fine. I came from a secret
lab not to far from here. By the way my names Bonita, and who are you?”

He
looked deep into my dark blue eyes, and said “My name is Optimus Prime
and I come from a plant called Cybertron and we are here to protect the
human race from the Decepticons.” I looked at him with a confused look
on my face and said “Decepdwhat what is that?” He said in that sexy
voice of his once again “Decepticons are our mortal enemies of ours form
our plant.” I replied to him saying “That’s what them damn things
were.”

We’ll continue after the jump. It’s a long one, so bring a snack.

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